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Well I have finally finished the Version 4 of the concept car, There has been lots of changes, to see all the differences

Wireframes for this image: [link]

have a look at the old version: [link]

This was rendered at 6k and looks really crisp at that resolution :)

Edit: Sorry for the resubmit, have made more changes, and this is the absolute final version of this image :)

All crits n comments welcome

Cheers,
Josh Baré
[3DnuTTa]

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:iconbigdave876:
Looks brilliant!!

Good job fella. :D

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:icon3dnutta:
why thank you dave =)
:iconbigdave876:
No=Prob dude, amazing gallery too. Just :+fav:'ed [link]

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:icongrettir:
Wow, the silver stuff really did something to it! :) Good angle too, why not try a bit more dramatic shading? Or adding lights in the headlights for added effect. :thumbsup: Really have to congratulate you on this concept. ;) Whats next?

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nice designing! i hope the next render will be a bit brighter? i'm liking the way you have the wing mirrors, snazzy :thumbsup: just one major crit though - i don't like the roof line. i think it needs to come down to the back at a much smoother angle, maybe one smooth line from the front windscreen to the boot. i also think it would benefit from chopping the roof down a bit as well. i love the design of the wheels, but i'm not sure on the bronze rim around them, imo i think they'd be better all silver... bit boring i know, but just more pleasing on the eye. fantastic deatil on this, though have you thought about including a spoiler? i think that would help the roof line a bit... nothing outragous, i would suggest body hugging, nearly hidden.

lol, i don't mean to change your design completely! and i hope you don't take offence at that little essay lol. hope that helps, keep it up :)

p.s. what software are you using?

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I may well play with the paint shader a bit more then, and the headlights is a good idea, will look into it.
Whats next? I think some more organic modelling, I want to finish this [link] off first before I start anything new =)
:iconboms:
Starts looking nice :) However the whole model seems a bit too "light" in the back - what I mean is that the front is very massive, while the back is quite thin, petite and kinda lacks something.. But anyway, great job :) I wish I had more time for modelling.. :P

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Very good! Except for the dark render, as already mentioned above :)

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:icon3dnutta:
I'll make the next render brighter, glad you like the mirrors, had some fun with them. The roof line, I think a lot of that is the angle, I've played witha few different looks to no avail., but I like your idea of 1 curve from the front to the back.
If I have time I'll change it, kinda need to get onto other things... =)
I tryed the rims with out the bronze and it just didn't work, ade the whole image a bit more bland, I think it also frames the rims better like this too. Matter of taste I guess.
I've been trying to stay away froma spoiler, but a lot of people have asked about it and say the front isn't ballanced with the smaller back, amy be a way of fixxing boh...
Not taking any offence at all, I appreciate all the constructive comments and taking the time to help me make it better!
Im using Maya

cheers,
Josh

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