Wow, the silver stuff really did something to it! Good angle too, why not try a bit more dramatic shading? Or adding lights in the headlights for added effect. Really have to congratulate you on this concept. Whats next?
nice designing! i hope the next render will be a bit brighter? i'm liking the way you have the wing mirrors, snazzy just one major crit though - i don't like the roof line. i think it needs to come down to the back at a much smoother angle, maybe one smooth line from the front windscreen to the boot. i also think it would benefit from chopping the roof down a bit as well. i love the design of the wheels, but i'm not sure on the bronze rim around them, imo i think they'd be better all silver... bit boring i know, but just more pleasing on the eye. fantastic deatil on this, though have you thought about including a spoiler? i think that would help the roof line a bit... nothing outragous, i would suggest body hugging, nearly hidden.
lol, i don't mean to change your design completely! and i hope you don't take offence at that little essay lol. hope that helps, keep it up
p.s. what software are you using?
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I may well play with the paint shader a bit more then, and the headlights is a good idea, will look into it.
Whats next? I think some more organic modelling, I want to finish this [link] off first before I start anything new
Starts looking nice However the whole model seems a bit too "light" in the back - what I mean is that the front is very massive, while the back is quite thin, petite and kinda lacks something.. But anyway, great job I wish I had more time for modelling..
I'll make the next render brighter, glad you like the mirrors, had some fun with them. The roof line, I think a lot of that is the angle, I've played witha few different looks to no avail., but I like your idea of 1 curve from the front to the back.
If I have time I'll change it, kinda need to get onto other things...
I tryed the rims with out the bronze and it just didn't work, ade the whole image a bit more bland, I think it also frames the rims better like this too. Matter of taste I guess.
I've been trying to stay away froma spoiler, but a lot of people have asked about it and say the front isn't ballanced with the smaller back, amy be a way of fixxing boh...
Not taking any offence at all, I appreciate all the constructive comments and taking the time to help me make it better!
Im using Maya
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Good job fella.
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lol, i don't mean to change your design completely! and i hope you don't take offence at that little essay lol. hope that helps, keep it up
p.s. what software are you using?
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Had a look at my Gallery yet . . . ?
<< As long as it looks good, Does it have to make Sense? >>
Whats next? I think some more organic modelling, I want to finish this [link] off first before I start anything new
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If I have time I'll change it, kinda need to get onto other things...
I tryed the rims with out the bronze and it just didn't work, ade the whole image a bit more bland, I think it also frames the rims better like this too. Matter of taste I guess.
I've been trying to stay away froma spoiler, but a lot of people have asked about it and say the front isn't ballanced with the smaller back, amy be a way of fixxing boh...
Not taking any offence at all, I appreciate all the constructive comments and taking the time to help me make it better!
Im using Maya
cheers,
Josh
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